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Junior Secondary



A visual representation of "City" by Louise Ho

Wong Sherman
St. Paul's Convent School


‘City’ is a poem about street-sleepers who make themselves a makeshift home somewhere in Hong Kong. In my artwork, I chose watercolour as the medium. The poem conveys a sense of despair, disorientation and loss. It is set in a gloomy and sombre winter night. To visualise the depressing scenes in my artwork, I used cold and dark colours in some parts. The sense of being trapped suggested by words like ‘criss-crossing’ and ‘maze’ is depicted through the illustration of fences with criss-crossing patterns next to the street-sleepers and bushes.

I did not use any bright colours on the street-sleepers. Although the poem revolves around them, I did not highlight their presence as I wanted to convey a message that they often go unnoticed by passers-by. They may seem weak and lonely, but they are also part of society. Therefore, we should not ignore their very existence. Instead, we should offer help to those in need and build an inclusive society.

City


No fingers claw at the bronze gauze
Of a Hong Kong December dusk,
Only a maze of criss-crossing feet
That enmeshes the city
In a merciless grid.

Between many lanes
Of traffic, the street-sleeper
Carves out his island home.
Or under the thundering fly-over,
Another makes his own peace of mind.

Under the staircase,
By the public lavatory,
A man entirely unto himself
Lifts his hand
And opens his palm.
His digits
Do not rend the air,
They merely touch
As pain does, effortlessly.

Louise Ho


“City” was published in Incense Tree: Collected Poems of Louise Ho by Louise Ho, p.45.
Copyrights © 2009 by Hong Kong University Press. Reprinted by permission of Hong Kong University Press.