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Commendable Award


Senior Secondary



A visual representation of "Vanilla in the stars" by Agnes Lam

TSE Yu Ning Eunice
Good Hope School


The poem puts emphasis on the special affinity and bonding between people. It also discusses the intricate links between the cosmic and the earthly worlds.

Since I am remaking this poem in an art form, I wish to reproduce the image readers have in their minds when reading the poem. Painted in acrylic, my artwork incorporates the style of surrealism, and illustrates two girls with warm smiles running towards each other on the ocean. Their hands merge and become stars as if they are fated to meet each other in their lives, and are descendants or fragments of the same star.

In the endless sky behind, there are planets with flowers growing on them, which is also an image the poet wonderfully crafts with words in the poem. The pollen takes the form of bright yellow stars, which are the same as the hands of the two girls. This shows a correlation between objects in my work. As a whole, my artwork presents a magical and dreamy vision. I wish to deliver the message that the encounters with different people in our lifetime are remarkable. Like stars, every memorable relationship we have is magnificent and precious in our hearts.

Vanilla in the stars


When I was a child,
I used to gaze at the stars above

our garden of roses, jasmine and lingzhi by the sea,
wondering how far away they really were,
whether they were shining still at the source
by the time their light reached me …

I was told that everyone was born with a star
which glowed or dimmed with the fortunes of each.
I also heard people destined to be close
were at first fragments of the same star

and from birth went searching for each other.
Such parting, seeking, reuniting might take
three lifetimes with centuries in between.
I had thought all these were but myths …

Now decades later, I read about the life of stars,
how their cores burn for ten billion years,
how towards the end, just before oblivion,
they atomize into nebulae of fragile brilliance –

ultra violet, infra red, luminous white, neon green or blue,
astronomical butterflies of gaseous light
afloat in a last waltz choreographed by relativity,
scattering their heated ashes into the void of the universe …

Some of this cosmic dust falls onto our little earth
carrying hydrocarbon compounds, organic matter
able to mutate into plant and animal life,
a spectrum of elemental fragrances …

Perhaps on the dust emanating from one ancient star
were borne the first molecules of a pandan leaf,
a sprig of mint or basil, a vanilla pod, a vine tomato,
a morning frangipani, an evening rose, a lily of the night …

Perhaps our parents or grandparents or ancestors further back
strolling through a garden or a field had breathed in the scents
effusing from some of these plants born of the same star
and passed them on as DNA in the genes of which we were made …

Could that be why, on our early encounters, we already sensed
in each other a whiff of something familiar, why, when we are near,
there is in the air some spark which seems to have always been there,
prompting us to connect our pasts, share our stories even as they evolve …

… till the day when we too burn away into dust
and the aromas of our essence dissipate
into the same kaleidoscope of ether light
to be drawn into solar space by astral winds …

… perhaps to make vanilla in a star to be
before the next lifetime of three?

Agnes Lam


“Vanilla in the Stars” was first published as: Lam, Agnes. (2009). Vanilla in the stars. In P. Amato & M. J. Salfran (Eds.), Nosside 2008: XXIVth Poetry Prize anthology (pp. 89-92). Reggio Calabria: Centro Studi Bosio, Italy. (Published in English and Italian.)